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You try to be nice, when no one

Wants to share the same level of kindness, with you.

They only take you as some joke, as some person to poke at.

They don't think your feelings matter,

when, in the end they do.

Don't let them get to you.

What good are those bastards anyway?

Only be you.

Let your soul fly to the sky,

like a butterfly.

Be free.

So that all may see.

That no one can pummel you down.
People aren't worth shit.

Don't let them tell you any different.
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Silent-winterland Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
geez whats wrong with people these days! Why do some people hate nice people I dont get it... o.0 
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TheIce-Sorceress Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Exactly!

Like, in this popular anime, Baka and test, there is a nice girl character named Mizuki who has a crush on the main guy character.

But of course, even though she is the extremely nice girl, people don't her to date the main guy.
Instead, they want him to date the mean bitchy girl in the show named Minami :roll:

Ugh, this world :no;
But thanks for the favorite ^_^
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Silent-winterland Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah....it happens in reality too like when I am in junior high the whole class hated me...:/ 
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TheIce-Sorceress Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
That's awful, I'm sorry to hear that :(
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Silent-winterland Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh well it's fine xD
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Fantasy-Fashionista Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Amen. I'm sick of letting people get to me. :-\
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TheIce-Sorceress Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Yeah, so am I :\

But i haven't found the strength to tell them not to yet sadly :(
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Fantasy-Fashionista Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's a fight, that's for sure.
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Honestly, I almost feel like this might come across more effectively as a prose piece, rather than as poetry. It reads like prose, both in my head and when I read it out loud. Just my two cents there. As before, I would focus on line breaks here. The flow is a little stilted, and I think that would fix it. Either making it prose or just revisiting line breaks.

Also? Damn straight.

"Let your soul fly to the sky,
like a butterfly." :heart:
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TheIce-Sorceress Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Ahh, I see :)

though, I hope it's not silly to say that, I truly don't know what a prose piece even is xc

There is so much I still feel I have yet to learn in literature :iconsweatdropplz: I hope I don't sound dumb or anything :(


thank you :)
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