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You try to be nice, when no one

Wants to share the same level of kindness, with you.

They only take you as some joke, as some person to poke at.

They don't think your feelings matter,

when, in the end they do.

Don't let them get to you.

What good are those bastards anyway?

Only be you.

Let your soul fly to the sky,

like a butterfly.

Be free.

So that all may see.

That no one can pummel you down.
People aren't worth shit.

Don't let them tell you any different.
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Silent-winterland Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
geez whats wrong with people these days! Why do some people hate nice people I dont get it... o.0 
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TheIce-Sorceress Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Exactly!

Like, in this popular anime, Baka and test, there is a nice girl character named Mizuki who has a crush on the main guy character.

But of course, even though she is the extremely nice girl, people don't her to date the main guy.
Instead, they want him to date the mean bitchy girl in the show named Minami :roll:

Ugh, this world :no;
But thanks for the favorite ^_^
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Silent-winterland Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah....it happens in reality too like when I am in junior high the whole class hated me...:/ 
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TheIce-Sorceress Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
That's awful, I'm sorry to hear that :(
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Silent-winterland Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh well it's fine xD
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TheIce-Sorceress Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Well, I hope people are nicer to you now that you're older :)
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Silent-winterland Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah I feel so old xD
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TheIce-Sorceress Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
lolz XD
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Fantasy-Fashionista Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Amen. I'm sick of letting people get to me. :-\
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TheIce-Sorceress Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Yeah, so am I :\

But i haven't found the strength to tell them not to yet sadly :(
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Fantasy-Fashionista Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's a fight, that's for sure.
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Honestly, I almost feel like this might come across more effectively as a prose piece, rather than as poetry. It reads like prose, both in my head and when I read it out loud. Just my two cents there. As before, I would focus on line breaks here. The flow is a little stilted, and I think that would fix it. Either making it prose or just revisiting line breaks.

Also? Damn straight.

"Let your soul fly to the sky,
like a butterfly." :heart:
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TheIce-Sorceress Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Ahh, I see :)

though, I hope it's not silly to say that, I truly don't know what a prose piece even is xc

There is so much I still feel I have yet to learn in literature :iconsweatdropplz: I hope I don't sound dumb or anything :(


thank you :)
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, I just meant that it might come across better as a little short story than a poem. But of course it's up to you and how you see this. :) You don't sound dumb at all, you're fine.
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TheIce-Sorceress Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you! :D

Hmm, I never thought of that before, though it has been quite a long time since I've written a decent short story :D
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sophiemai Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You know what? This is beautiful. So well written, and I can really identify with it. It's great advice that I wish i'd read about 1.5 years ago, before certain things happened. :) Brilliant.
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TheIce-Sorceress Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you :)

That really means a lot.

I'm glad to still find people out there who can actually see something in my artwork :)
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sophiemai Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Definitely - it's the most meaningful thing i've read in a long time, honestly. It applies so much to my experiences and I really like it.

Thank you for writing it, hehe. :)
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TheIce-Sorceress Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
No problem :hug:

I'm glad you were able to grow strong and overcome whatever was pulling you down.
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sophiemai Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Awh, thank you so much. Hug I am still working through it, but there is light at the end of the tunnel. :)
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TheIce-Sorceress Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Really?

Because sadly I haven't been able to see that light yet.
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sophiemai Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw, I am sorry to hear that. I know you will, though. :) 
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TheIce-Sorceress Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I'm not exactly sure that will happen
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MsGeekNerd Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
True and not... The point is there is no point... That's why...
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TheIce-Sorceress Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Hm?
Your words confused me a bit XD
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MsGeekNerd Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The point of life is there is no point so why do you care about it? Live for yourself and live the best life you can and who cares if some asshole says different.... That's it...
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TheIce-Sorceress Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Oh... I see XD
thank you!

Btw, can you please see my latest poem, Pretty Woman?
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MsGeekNerd Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I did...
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TheIce-Sorceress Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Did you like it?

What did you think?
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MsGeekNerd Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I liked it. I think it describes that one girl who everyone seems to love out of fear and twisted admiration pretty damn well... I like what you did with the poem in general. If I had any criticism (and now I'm just being nit picky) it's a bit too angry. But I do understand you were angry at the time you wrote it and that's the point of the poem. Like I said, nit picky. But I really loved this. Power to the outcasts!
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TheIce-Sorceress Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you :)

Hmm, I wrote that poem based on some bad experiences I've had with mean girls like that.

Some even on Deviantart.


It just annoys me how the girls who are given good looks and such sometimes use it as a sick way to gain power and manipulate others by their fake "charms"
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TheNaughtyMutt Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Student Photographer
Being nice doesn't mean letting people take over.... *shrugs* I try to be kind to everyone. Most of the time karma is on my side Wink Razz 
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TheIce-Sorceress Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Because you're one of the lucky ones X3
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bcollins39302 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Student Digital Artist
It is um.. "Trying too hard" with two os 
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TheIce-Sorceress Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
...........  

-.-
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bcollins39302 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I see you fixed it
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TheIce-Sorceress Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
…..

-.-
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bcollins39302 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Student Digital Artist
What lol?
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TheIce-Sorceress Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Nothing.

Just have a bad headache
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bcollins39302 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
oh
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TheIce-Sorceress Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Yeah :/
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FearoTheGreat Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
I gave up on being nice...
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TheIce-Sorceress Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I think honestly everyone does when they're in high school
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FearoTheGreat Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
Yee. It doesnt help that I was the only one from my school to move to senior school...
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TheIce-Sorceress Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
What? :?
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ypoolnipop Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
You're wrong, actually. Not everyone is worthless. You're living proof that some people have worth.
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TheIce-Sorceress Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
:confused:

You think I have worth?
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ypoolnipop Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
Of course! You've proven it, too.
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TheIce-Sorceress Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
How?
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ypoolnipop Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
That depends on how you define value. For each definitionm though, I see proof.
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